My first attempt at short fiction that won as a featured writing in Writer's Melon. My story along with the other winners will get featured in an anthology e-book which will be published by Writer's Melon eventually.
Till then do read up the story at the below link and provide your valuable feedback so that I can improve my narrations.
https://writersmelon.com/blog_detail_not_logged_in/YmxvZ19pZF8xMDU4MDU2/Trapped?s=09
Congratulations! Nice one, and well deserved
ReplyDeleteThank you so much sir 🙏
DeleteCongratulations, Ma'am !
ReplyDeleteIt will be truly an adorable experience for me to read your another form of creative writing....best wishes and regards
Just read the piece....the context as well as the conveying are superb...the way you held the suspense has contributed towards the short story in shaping its structure and refining the uncertainty while readers reach the end...
ReplyDeleteIt is indeed an abode...one works or without...and one pays to remain...and at one point it is heavier...costlier....and home beckons...for a finality...the sojourn ends...the greatest joke of life is unsaid always....
Lovely wishes
Thank you so much sir... Somehow I have started waiting for your comments on my writings to get my dose of positive encouragement. Thanks so much for all the time and your patience in reading my pieces and commenting on them. Truly grateful 🙏
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